Pitch - Peer Feedback

To get feedback from our pitch we had a focus group of our class take a look at our pitches and say something positive and something that needs to be improved about our ideas, this was what was said about my pitch:


Positive

• Good detail in pitch
• Good colour scheme, very girly
• Nice abbreviation of MBS!
• Good ideas on the shoot
• Everything relates well to your genre
• Photoshoot well planned out

Negative 

• Use more colours in colour scheme, maybe add baby blue
• Details about the layout of magazine
• Haven't explained the price (essential information)
• Think about secondary audience
• Explain masthead

This feedback can help me in the production of my magazine as it says what needs to stay the same in my plans and what I can improve and what to change about my ideas.